develop it a bit more
take the idea further, and develop actual graphics and characters. More user control then click and hope for the best would be good, let the artwork tell the story and you won't need such a lead in.. oh and the music plays on top of its self if your soundtrack starts in frame 1 of scene one move it to scene 2 and add " stopAllSounds(); " to the actionscript in scene 1 instead that'll stop that.. but there are many other ways to work around it. Good luck and take your time, don't need another blam'd submission